2 objects popped into my head when I thought hrmmmm mobile…electronic and baby…not to say babies are idiots! =_=’
Simple colours and shapes.
Combination of the two using mobile symbols looks clumsy.
Took out symbols and realign the hooks kinda like the simplicity, would like to see it as a photo…
Swapped symbols for mobile versions of the smilie, to keep in theme of style if it could be called one…
Continuing repetitions throughout the piece.
Varied smaller mobiles. More disrupted patterns.
Added numbers as those found in instruction manuals, esp ones from IKEA which are good at instructing, bad at providing materials -_- mmm grapes…
Varied background to see if a slightly lighter background would help the objects stand out, even the slight grey takes away teh boldness, more likely to keep the black background.